Saturday, May 25, 2019

Spring in the Air: May Wrap-Up


Spring is here! I went to the beach today, and even though the water was freezing, the sand was warm and the air had that quality of salt and tanginess that made me think maybe we're going to have a pretty decent summer. I can't be sure yet...but I think there's a lot of good stuff coming up in my near future, and I hope there will be a lot of good stuff for y'all too!



Posts this Month:

May the Fouth: Five Writing Tips from Chewbacca: This one was the thought-child of several members of the team, although Catherine and Clare did the actual writing! To celebrate Star Wars day, we talked about the beloved character Chewbacca and how we can use him as an example for writing sidekick characters. 



How To Write a Stress-Free Serial for Your Blog: Keturah Lamb wrote this post about how to tell a serial story on your blog without freaking out, and she did a great job! She's written two blog serials and the second one, the story of Susan Pevensie from the Chronicles of Narnia, is actually in the process of being published right now. Go check it out at her blog!


Monthly Stats

Website:
100 followers (wahoo!), 45, 919 all-time views

Facebook:
59 likes, 68 followers

Twitter:
304 followers, 449 tweets

Instagram: 
40 posts, 139 followers

Pinterest:
22 boards, 140 followers

YouTube:
47 subscribers

Goodreads:
71 group members, 16 discussions

Around the Blogosphere

Several of our members, including Lila Kims, did the Voted Most Likely Tag! 

Fairy Tale Central focused on the tale of Rapunzel for the month of May, and the posts that they did were awesome! We continue to love the snarky commentary posts where Christine, Arielle, and Faith roast the original fairy tale story in all its cringeworthy glory.

Our follower Ivie Brooks did a pair of beautiful posts in celebration of her 20th birthday talking about what she's learned and where she wants to go with this next year of her life! 

Nicki Chapelway is posting a serial story on her blog! She's already got two posts up, but this story is brilliant and you need it in your life.

Melissa Gravitas did an excellent post on whether writing is a matter of talent or practice, and I thought it took a very deep and unique angle on that question.



This summer is going to be amazing, everyone, so hang in there! It's springtime, and I, for one, can't wait for it to be warm enough to swim. Keep being awesome!


Saturday, May 11, 2019

How To Write A Stress-Free Serial For Your Blog



I've written several serials for my blog now, two fiction and many nonfiction. And I've finished them all ... something that has resulted in many of my friends asking me, "Please, share your secret!?"

And because I don't want it to be a secret, I have decided to share.


1. Have an idea worth finishing
First, know what you want to write. It's all good and fun to know that you want to write a serial, but make sure before you start writing that it's actually serial material. Inspired to write something, but been putting it off because it's just not quite good enough or appropriate for a traditional novel but you're in love with it anyway? 

Ask yourself if your current reader base would like it. For example, writing horror if your readers are a bunch of Christian 14-year-olds is not a great idea. Try to make sure the content still fits your blog. 

All of my serials were ideas I was passionate about. 

The fiction ones, The Lawrence Children and Susan of Narnia, were ideas I'd had since I was about fourteen, so the plots had been simmering in my brain for a good five-eight years before finding life in words. 

My nonfiction serials, Living With The Amish, Why I Love/ Hate Myers Briggs, On Spending Time and Working Before Resting, and many others were all topics I was passionate about through experience and thus couldn't keep in a single blog post. 

2. Finish it BEFORE you start posting 
Then, once you're certain, write it all out. DON'T WRITE SOME OF IT AND POST BEFORE IT'S FINISHED. That's a sure way to guarantee a load of stress for yourself. Plus, you'll end up forgetting and finding you don't know what to write next, and then your serial will never be finished, or you'll have long breaks between publishing breaks, and your audience will lose interest. 

So write everything first.

For both The Lawrence Children and Susan of Narnia I wrote the first drafts in under three weeks. 

For most of my nonfiction series, I wrote them all out in the space of a couple days, if not a single day. Except my Amish series took right at a year to put together, because of having to work with so many people.

Because my fictional serials weren't novels I was trying to write for publication, but something I was doing for fun for my blog, I didn't use quite the same method as I usually do. I took maybe a week tops break from the manuscripts, then dove right into the second draft. And that's all the writing I did ... the second draft usually took me about the same amount of time as the first. 

In the first draft, I focused on getting the story down. 
In the second draft, I focused on making the story more interesting, taking out parts that made it dull, adding description where I needed it, and tightening my prose. 


3. Find Beta readers, and possibly editors
After finishing the second draftI looked for a few beta readers among friends and Go Teen Writers. I even found a few people wanting to edit and had a few people go over my serials. 

I didn't want to put a ton of work into these as it's just for my blog, but at the same time, I didn't want to post garbage. So I looked for about three-five beta readers and one or two editors. I did this only on my larger series though, not any of my two-parters. 

My beta readers would point out plot inconsistencies, bad dialogue or confusing wording, and characters doing things out of turn. 

My editors would do basic line edits. 
I actually hired Elisabeth Houseman to edit Susan of Narnia, because I was really excited about that serial. And she did a fantastic line edit. 

I've also had R. M. Archer edit for me, and I've always been very happy with her work. 

One last thing that's very good to do, is to thank all your beta readers and editors. And I actually write and schedule this post just after finishing up step three so that I don't forget who was involved with helping me. Here's my afterward post for the Lawrence Children as an example. And I have one written up for my Susan serial, too. It's just scheduled and waiting to post until the serial has all been posted ;) 

I should have probably written a thank you post for my Amish series, too. But I didn't ... and at this point, I'd have a hard time remembering all who helped me put that together. Which is really sad and why I should have written it when I had the chance. 

4. Schedule it on your blog
This actually will take some time. For my shorter series, I can give it an evening or two. But my fictional series took several evenings. 

I'm not sure how other blogging platforms work, but Blogger has really funky formatting behaviors. Especially when copying from one place to another. I usually write through Google Docs or LibreOffice. Sometimes I can copy the text straight over from there to Blogger. But sometimes copying and pasting will put white behind all the text, so I'll have to copy and paste into the website bar, then copy that and paste into my Blogger document. 

That'll make the text standard to whatever I have set on Blogger, but it also means everything is now blocked text. So I have to go through and make all my paragraphs.

IT'S VERY IMPORTANT your format looks decent. Don't think your readers are going to give your story a chance if the text looks miserable. And small paragraphs are crucial, so don't be lazy with forming paragraphs. 

Once I have all my posts formatted in Blogger, I choose a regular day for posting. For non-fiction series, I post on my regular Wednesdays. I did my Amish posts every couple of days, but my two-parters were done on one Wednesday and then the next. 

I also collect all my permalinks and include those at the end of every post so that readers in the future can conveniently find any post in the series. 

For my fictional series, I form a new draft and copy the permalinks there, since those posts are usually about twelve posts long. Once all twelve permalinks are together and formatted how I want them, I copy them and paste them at the end of each of my other posts. Having that extra draft to work from saves time from going back and forth through each of the actual posts. Once I'm done, I delete the draft containing the permalinks. 

5. Forget that about it and allow others to enjoy!
You've written your serial. You have it scheduled out ... if it's a twelve-parter, that means you have a year of content and you NEVER have to worry about writing or posting. Whew! You've just saved yourself from losing ten years of life. Can't you just feel that stress rolling away, and wow, there's so much joy? 

All you have to do now is share your posts on social media whenever they publish—most times I forget it's even time for the next installment to post until after the fact. It's always a nice surprise to see that it's still working without my needing to remember its existence. 

Posting your serial should be fun, and this method of doing it makes certain of that. Your readers can enjoy and you need never have the displeasure of experiencing stress or blogger shame. 

Have you ever written a serial? Do you have any tips to share? And what are some of your favorite serials, fiction or nonfiction, that you've ever read from blogs? Share links! 


Saturday, May 4, 2019

May the Fourth: 5 Writing Tips that Can be Learned from Chewbacca



Today, as many fans around the world know, is Star Wars day! The reason behind this is that one of the common sayings in the series is "May the force be with you", and today we say "May the Fourth be with you."

Because of this special occasion, we here at Rebellious Writing wanted to do a post of some kind featuring something from the Star Wars series. When we learned that Peter Mayhew, who plays Chewbacca in the series, had recently passed away; we decided to focus on his character, and what we as writers can learn about it.

Presenting:

5 Writing Tips that Can be Learned from Chewbacca


via GIPHY


1. Make your creatures distinctive in many ways - physical, mental and emotional.
What makes Chewy stand out is his height, his hair and his language. One time he is referred to as a "walking carpet", because of how he looks; but anyone who is familiar with him knows how lovable he is.

2. Provide non-English speaking characters lots of context for his speech.
If your sidekick doesn't speak English, you're going to need another character to translate or provide non-verbal gestures so that he may be understood by the other characters. Han's replies to Chewy always indicate what he said. You can also always tell his emotions based on the pitch of his voice.




3. Loyalty.
This is very often the defining characteristic of a sidekick character. Chewy can be a little harsh when you first meet him, but once you know him he is going to stick with you. An example of that is in Episode 5, when he notices that C-3PO is missing and does not stop until he finds him.

4. Using a sidekick's flaw as conflict for the hero.
Chewy's short temper slowed down the group several times during the original films, creating frustration for the team members...among other things. While it's easy to create this puppet-like side character that do the hero's bidding, this makes for a boring and non-memorable character.




5. Have the sidekick be able to act independently from the hero.
In Episode 6, Chewy separates himself from the main fighting force to overtake an AT-ST unit (otherwise known as the metallic dinosaur-like tanks). This act turns the tide of the battle in favor of the Resistance. This was not under Han's orders, but of his own intuition. This again comes down to having the side character be his own character and not a puppet. If Chewie was under Han's orders all the time, he would have been useless in Episode 8.


In Conclusion

Chewbacca is such a famous and memorable sidekick, and a worthy character to base your own sidekick characters on. We hope that you can use these tips to flesh out your own characters.

"May the force be with you" in all of your writing escapades!